[TOP LEFT CORNER/ON TOP OF PANEL 1]
A large purple sticky note appears to be stuck to the page with "TONEDEAF! Track Two: Couldn't Be Me" written on it.
[PANEL 1]
A large aerial/isometric-esque view of a city block corner. Large trees with huge amounts of bright orange leaves line the roads, and several cars are driving by. Rhapsody and Maz walk down the sidewalk in the center of the image.
RHAPSODY: ...I mean I've always wanted one but my Mom wouldn't let me get one. I only realized this morning that I'm twenty-six and can do what I want.
MAZ: Oh, to be young again.
[PANEL 2]
A straight shot of Rhapsody and Maz walking down the sidewalk towards the camera. Maz is wearing a black leather jacket with a red torn up shirt underneath, and has her hands in her jacket pockets. Rhapsody has a black T-shirt and an orange plaid flannel on, and is leaning forwards cheekily, turned towards Maz with a toothy grin and her hands clasped behind her back.
RHAPSODY: Ah, I forgot you're absolutely ancient.
MAZ: I'm thirty.
RHAPSODY: That's what I said. What's it like being so old and decrepit?
MAZ: It's not too bad, other than getting dragged around by your adolescent coworkers.
RHAPSODY: Oh shut up.
[PANEL 3]
A waist-up shot of Maz with a blank expression.
MAZ: How much farther's the walk? You know we could've parked closer.
[PANEL 4]
Rhapsody puts her hands on her hips and puffs out her chest, speaking loudly with a confident smile.
RHAPSODY: Bah! This is the fun of the city! What's even the point if you don't take in the sights and smells?!
Comments TONEDEAF! - Page 31
2 commentsI'm SO EXCITED FOR YOU you've been working so hard on this for such a long time!!!!!
you always kill it with the backgrounds!
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