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TONEDEAF! - Page 26

Published June 12, 2026

Rhapsody Mazurka

Author's Notes

Originally completed on July 22nd, 2025.

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[PANEL 1]
Rhapsody throws her head back and sinks into the couch, her arms and hands going dramatically limp next to her. Her plate of food is still in her lap and untouched.
RHAPSODY: UGH Maz, I'm so sorry. I shouldn't have invited you out just to babysit me. That was super uncool of me.

[PANEL 2]
A shoulder-up shot of Maz, looking up at her from slightly below eye level. Maz is glancing in Rhapsody's direction with a somewhat irritated expression.
MAZ: Yes, it was.

[PANEL 3]
Rhapsody, still leaning back into the couch, looks away from Maz with a downcast expression. No dialogue.

[PANEL 4]
Same shot as panel 2, but Maz is now looking away from Rhapsody with a neutral expression. She's holding her fork with a bit of egg on it up to her face.
MAZ: ...But...

[PANEL 5]
Same shot as panel 3, but Rhapsody is now looking at Maz hesitantly, unsure of what she's doing to say. No dialogue.

[PANEL 6]
Mazurka puts the fork in her mouth with a smile, closing her eyes calmly.
MAZ: You needed a friend. I'm happy I could be that for you.

[PANEL 7]
Same as panels 3 & 5, but now Rhapsody gives a gentle smile towards Maz. No dialogue.

TONEDEAF! - Page 27

Published June 12, 2026

Rhapsody Mazurka

Author's Notes

Originally completed on July 30th, 2025.

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[PANEL 1]
A shoulder-up shot of both Mazurka and Rhapsody. Maz is in the foreground, her face mostly obscured, with Rhapsody in the background.
MAZ: Honestly, I'm just sad that I didn't get any stories about your band.
Rhapsody makes an intense expression of surprise with a large "!!" next to her.

[PANEL 2]
A close-up of Mazurka's blue electric guitar.
RHAPSODY (OFF): WAIT A SECOND!

[PANEL 3]
Rhapsody is now standing in the alcove that houses the guitars, gesturing with both arms towards the blue electric guitar, and with a frustrated expression on her face.
RHAPSODY: You never told me you play guitar!

[PANEL 4]
A shot of Maz on the couch from near Rhapsody. Maz is sitting calmly with a deadpan expression.
MAZ: You never asked.
Rhapsody is in the foreground with a sheepish expression.
RHAPSODY (to self): Seriously??

[PANEL 5]
Four drawings of Rhapsody being really excited as she bounces around the room being really excited. In the first drawing, she's in the distance, turned away with both arms up in the air in a celebratory stance.
RHAPSODY: Well, whatever! This is PERFECT!
In the second drawing, she's much closer to the camera, making a fist in the air with her right hand and pointing to the distance with her left hand.
RHAPSODY: Our old drummer and bassist are still in town, Maz!!
In the third, Rhapsody is now at the far end of the room, with her hand smacked against her forehead.
RHAPSODY: I've been trying to find a new guitarist for forEVER!
In the fourth and final drawing, Rhapsody is very close to the camera and is bending forwards with both of her arms together pulled in towards her chest in a pleading stance.
RHAPSODY: Would you want to play with us??