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TONEDEAF! - Page 18

Published June 12, 2026

Rhapsody Mazurka

Author's Notes

Originally completed on March 21st, 2026.

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[PANEL 1]
A close-up scenery shot of the hanging lamp above Rhapsody and Mazurka's booth. The lamp is slightly out of shot.
RHAPSODY: ...

[PANEL 2]
A close-up shot of the bartender shaking a drink over his shoulder with a pleased expression. He is slightly out-of-frame.
RHAPSODY: ...Did...

[PANEL 3]
A close-up Dutch-angle shot of one of Rhapsody's empty margarita glasses on the table. A couple other glasses and the drink specials menu are also visible in the shot behind the glass in the foreground.
RHAPSODY: ...Did I ever tell you I used to be in a band?

[PANEL 4]
A side-shot bust of Maz, looking down to Rhapsody while smiling gently.
MAZ: You've mentioned it once or twice, yeah. No details, though. What'd you play?

[PANEL 5]
A similar shot of Rhapsody, still leaning her elbows/arms onto the table but with her head lifted. She isn't making eye contact with Maz and is still crying, but she's also smiling gently now.
RHAPSODY: I didn't "play" anything, I sang. I also got the band together, so there's that.

TONEDEAF! - Page 19

Published June 12, 2026

Rhapsody Mazurka

Author's Notes

What's that in panel 3?? The mysterious hand of the mysterious guitarist from high school??? (⚆ᴗ⚆)

Originally completed on April 3rd, 2026.

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[PANEL 1]
Mazurka puts her hand to her chin thoughtfully and looks up and to the side.
MAZ: Ohh, right, right. How long since you last played together?

[PANEL 2]
A close-up of Rhapsody wiping tears from her eyes with both hands. She's gently smiling while looking towards Maz.
RHAPSODY: God... eight years? Don't make me do math when I'm drunk, please.

[PANEL 3]
MAZ: Geez, that was high school for you, right?
RHAPSODY: Yep.
MAZ: Why'd you quit?
RHAPSODY: Our guitarist moved away. And I needed to focus on college, I guess.
The panel below this dialogue shows an airport gate with passengers boarding. In the foreground is a pink roller bag being held onto by a white hand with a brown spot on it. The full character is out of frame.

[PANEL 4]
MAZ: "I guess"?
RHAPSODY: Ugh, I'd give anything to go back to that. To sing with them again.
The panel shows a side-shot of a younger Rhapsody coming in from the right, singing into a microphone. Her facial features are obscured, but she's smiling while singing.

[PANEL 5]
A side-shot of Modern-day Rhapsody at the booth, coming in from the left of the panel making her appear to be back-to-back with Rhapsody from the fourth panel. This Rhapsody is sadly looking down at her palm.
RHAPSODY: I'm telling you, Maz. We were gonna BA something.

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